Sometimesinbetween

sometimesinbetween :D

Wow, what a powerful poem! Not many poems hold my attention, but this one did all the way through! Great job! He watched in horror as some tried to run ...

Wow, what a powerful poem! Not many poems hold my attention, but this one did all the way through! Great job! Quote: He watched in horror as some tried to ...

Wow, what a powerful poem! Not many poems hold my attention, but this one did all the way through! Great job! Quote: He watched in horror as some tried to ...

Wow, what a powerful poem! Not many poems hold my attention, but this one did all the way through! Great job! He watched in horror as some tried to run ...

9/10 Cool!

Hey Gahks! Great piece of work here, I really liked it! This isn't a very useful critique, I just wanted to say that I found the elusive adjective, and on ...

This is basically good. The end left a little to be desired. What did he do with the gun? Commit suicide? Kill somebody? Just the fact that he had a ...

8/10 :D

10/10 awesome!

7/10 :D

So true! I love this poem! The only thing that didn't flow well for me (the rest went beautifully!) was the third line, but that could just be a matter ...

7/10 :D

Oh wow. Hilarious! I loved it! The only thing I caught was this: Briana clickity-clacked her trendy heels out of the classroom, leaving me stranded there in the desk, staring ...

Wow, I really love this! You did an excellent job! There's nothing much I can critique on, I just wanted to say great job! :D Nearly scared the shavings out ...