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Yo Mutant. Welcome to the club! Hope you enjoy and enjoy and... :P Anyhoo... Looking forward to critique you work...Mwahahahahahahahahahaha!!

Right Have you ever hugged someone you loved before? Wrapped your arms around them tight and pressed yourself against their body in the heat of the moment? No I haven't ...

Okay... Never did I think it possible, I like the rhyming pattern and To feel the way I do, the tempo it is flowing on. Good work on that I ...

Sorry. I agree with Jiggity. There isn't really any point in this story except for an artificial intelligence that can talk. You should have brought more into it. Give us ...

This actually reminds of a game I played. Project Zero: The tormented I like it. Very nice. It's hard to say which one I really like, but the first one ...

Yo Alex welcome 2 YWS. Your friend is cool and knows what he/she is talking about :lol: 8) :? :idea: :?: :!: :evil: :twisted: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: ...

I see... Well yeah. I guess that if u were faced with curtain death or this photo u posted...I would've done the same thing you did :lol:

Funky picture. I love the plant that you chose. Also how the background plays a nice part in forming the focus on the plant. You could have taken it a ...

I like it very nice. :wink: There is a few parts I don't like though... am I breathing? I sent it in for one of my school projects with these ...

I love the 3rd one! So intimidating... The last one I also like. 1st one...not so much. Second last...not so much. 2nd one is okay... Ah well. The 3rd one ...

I liked it. Very nice. Well since it is early in the morning and my brain isn't functioning, I'll critique it later. :lol:

Okay. This isn't my best book ever. Kind to think of it, I never wrote a good book. Ah well... Romonin chronicles Prologue The moon was full. Its light teasing ...

Cool, cool. I liked it. Very deep. hehe. Till I saw a signnnnnn It is weird. signnnnnn. Well I'm a sucker, so please explain to me what you meant by ...

This is great!!!! It's been a long time (No offense towards the other writers. I'm actually including myself.) since I read such a great poem. If there were a bunch ...

Wow, wow. The end... :wink: I like it. Well same mistakes in the first chapter. You really need to work on your punctuation, etc. because in the end, it doesn't ...