Someguy

I'm back! Let us start. It is one of your better poems. You have a few parts which I find very cliche and that is NOT what you want in ...

In this short poem, you said a lot. There are a few parts that are a bit different. It has a nice rhyming patorn and is in a steady tempo ...

1) Very nice. Love the movement of the cat. 2) Love how the focus falls on the cat and also that there is a a nice background. 3) Really awesome. ...

Yo what's up? Just came to say hi! Hope ya like it here... -Someguy-

Hahaha. I'm the only one who saw it was golf without reading the comments. Booya! I don't know, nice word choice, but a little immature. I'm not saying you're immature, ...

Firstly, hallo there!! New members are cool. This wasn't really good. Everything was unclear and some parts didn't even make sense. Yes you really out done yourself to write a ...

Woohoo!! Slow down! You really threw your emotions into this poem and I'm not saying it's bad, but jeez! My dream is to be better than I am now. To ...

First of all. Hello!! Never greeted you I think. Okay. The beginning was very good, but when it progressed, you got a little sloppy. It might be nice if you ...

Well... I like the idea that it is informal and that you add things in our every day lives. I think it's a great idea. If all the world took ...

Don't beg for things. Do it yourself or else you won't get anything.- Eureka 7 lol

Banned for saying what I wanted to say. Also because you're wasting a good apple. :P

Dance with the devil- Breaking Benjamin

I don't know I like the style in which you wrote it and that it also showed a little emotion. The downside is that some parts are too expected. your ...

I see. Okay... WHAT!?!?! Nah just joking. No I see your point and everything and it is good. I'm just one of those who doesn't see ourselves as gods and ...

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