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Steamy, very hot Liked every minute of it. A few mistakes but it isnt life threatening so yeah :)

I loved the idea of the story and tell eveything in good detail, jus one thing. PARAGRAPHS!! it makes it much easier to read. When I looked at it, it ...

The valley As I walk to the valley of death… It is a site to behold. For this valley keeps a secret. A secret not known by many. Death lingers ...

Just one thing, make spaces. Makes it much easier to read Nice poem loved it :D :)

Not bad, not good but great!! Really loved it. There were a few things you could've changed but I'll pretend I didnt see it. Really good Keep it up. :)

Not bad, I think with a little more work, it would become a nice poem. Keep up the work! :)

Name: Someguy(Marius) Age: An age Race: Human(Hopefully) Gender: Male Appearence: White with brown hair and blue eyes Personality: I live with hatred Abilities: Play drums and write History: I was ...

Well done Nice piece, really shows the darkness of math, very and nice. For some reason it reminds me on Alber Einstein. Don't know why, but have been weird lately. ...

You write good. The beggining was very nice, gave me the idea he die, but then it was just a bad break-up. Not bad at all. :)

Not bad, a few spelling mistakes but I think is a book that can go further.

Funny. Her brother. Poor girl, must be confused :lol:

I love books like this where deseases brakes out or viruses! Really good, feel sorry for the dogs though. I liked and poor guy. I'll never do something like that.

Really funny :lol: Enjoyd it :lol: Very cute in a way :D A few corny parts :wink: but still good Well done

What’s the plan? I couldn’t sleep that night. To know that at this very moment, people are dying or are already dead, gave me the feeling of nothing. Emptiness inside ...

Really nice and dramatic. Not that pathetic love stories. This was really good :) :D :) :D :) :wink: You write it as if you are part of it. Really ...