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This is more like a prologue, really. The first sentence wasn't good and it change the idea of what is to come. At first I thought it was a night ...

Banned for asking what's it like in New-Zealand.

I'm not sure. It isn't good for me. No offense. I don't like it at all. It is too sloppy and maybe it will make a good song. I just ...

Okay these are good. The first one isn't good. I can see that it was like a practice sketch And not a bad one either. I think you can go ...

Banned for saying "weird siggy" WRITE IT OUT.

Okay... This is like a Gothic version of a hippy song. lol Who is willing to give a fatherly role, on a walk to the beauty way. (Beauty way?!? Please ...

Definitely Narrative poem. Okay I see the story...I think. Sorry. I failed to see what you tried to tell me. It is either I'm a retard or it isn't a ...

I have to agree with Jiggity. It was dull and my imagination didn't even switch on. You did too many errors. This poem is as if you just wrote it ...

Okay. I don't know... Some people are torn to pieces By a break up or a unshared love Some people cry their hearts out And some scream and pout The ...

Okay. Very nice poem. I really enjoyed it. Little girl so lost Sunken so low In the questionable things she’s done This is very interesting. I'm not sure about this. ...

Banned for being 11 years old.

What about sushi? That is good too. Oh wait...yeah I see...You're a vegetarian...ah well... Oh yeah I forgot in my other post. If ya need any help. PM me.

Let's say it like this. If you have an creative imagination, talk to yourself, think someone is standing next to you and talk with it, think the world is going ...

Why are the Australians taking over? Ah well..nah just joking. Australia is cool!!!! Which part of Australia do you live in? Anyhoo, So how are you? Do you play any ...

This was very short. It really needs more. You explained those 4 lines, but it wasn't enough. For the span of a lifetime things may last or for this precious ...