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It is not bad. You should describe your charachters a bit more. I didn't read the entire thing,too busy(sorry) Can't find anything wrong in the parts I read. Really nice.

Really nice. Love the idea. I love the part: 'The warm,sweet night Sings lullabies' Really good.Just needs a little work here and there,but overall. It was good.

Real good imagery. That's what's important to me. I find that imagery brings any poem together. If you don't have,well, then you're pathetic, but this poem, is really good example ...

Really nice beginning. A bit confused with the hole and stuff but thats just me. It is good and can't wait for next chapter. :D

Really realized what we are doing to this planet. So I wrote this. Not much but yeah. I hate life I hate life It’s not real. It is a waste ...

You caught me at the last stanza. Really good. [/quote]This isn't love I would make it ' Is this love?' Makes it more dramatic. You know. She is confused and ...

Really good. You have great imagery in this and that is what's important to me. Well done. :)

I don't know why I wrote this one, I was a bit bored and I was running out of ideas so, hope you enjoy it. :lol: :lol: A violin A ...

It was reallygood for the first Chapter. I think you should make the ' 9 AM' Nine o'clock in the morning. Makes it more classic if you know what I ...

I love it. It is really good. I think you said 'My love' too many times, but if you look at the rest of the poem, it's great. Nice one ...

It’s got to be quick! We were at the academy. Looking around we saw busses. Probably our ride. As we walked up to one of them, I heard a familiar ...

I loved this. :) :D :) :D Really great, my favourite Stanza was 4. Really well written. It is really true what you say: Poems don't have to be a ...

Very nice. Really liked it. I think it was a bit short and you could've added more, but overall it was good.

It is not bad, but great! :) I really liked it, very deep in a way. Just one thing, I think an a should be added in the beginning of ...

Not bad. I wont say it is the best, but it is good for someone who doesnt write alot of poetry. :lol: It was a nice poem to imagine if ...