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First of all. What? I didn't really like this poem. You neede to work on it a little more. I bark at thee to write again, only then can the ...

This is a rap song in StarWars time so if you don't understand a part or two, You probobly didn't watch or play StarWars. Fetts Vette Crusa mo sespa, A ...

Junk food Killed Superman. I woke up I walked outside to the dark sky above I saw firelights but, they were bombs dropping down. (Chorus) I believed in superman Until ...

I was bored and might be disturbing so yeah. :? This place I never thought, That I would come to this place, A place of hell. It is different from ...

Are you sure you feel allright? You...write disturbing things. I've killed everyone close to me So they aren't here for me now. No one cares about me, but... Would you ...

Ok...Really...disturbing...*looking around for something* Is this poem for...um...someone you hate?*keeps his lightsaber close* Overall it is good...buy disturbing.*moving slowely back* Poor woman.*St

Okay, to tell you the truth, it was too short. I dint know whar you were trying to do but okay. The beginning, everything was destroyd. Where's the romance in ...

It is a good poem. I think there was a few mistakes. Light shines through the top like water through a strainer. I dont know. The rest of the poem ...

Very nice. Very different. Fingers sticky, Sickly sweet. Thick and gloopy, Bad for teeth. Good on pankcakes, Puds and more. Dripping slowly, To the floor. Spoon it out, Onto some ...

I loved this it was great. Very nice flow and great timing. I can image the pace and beat. Well done.

It is good, just a bit short. Not much to say, Sorry. Really nice.

Not bad. I don't think this is a poem in a way. You have multiple spelling mistakes. I think ur beautiful by the way. The way get ready for that ...

It was good in a way.Meaningful and deep. It is good, but it doen't put you in the reading mode, if you know what I mean. Some mistakes but can ...

My very first song I wrote. I think I was in Gr. 6. My life 1 part Now,now,now This is my life I didn’t know that It could end like ...

Sorry, I meant it is a good story.