Someguy

Really nice. I love the beat and rythym. There is something happening in this rap song. You should've posted it by lyrics. I love the ending! Really good.

Not bad.

I think it was nice. It is a good beginning. Just one thing. You need to make paragraphs. This is really important. Makeas it easier to read. Anyway I think ...

It is only two lines,but there is so much in it. I really liked it. Very nice.

It is so beautiful. Really nice.

This is tough. A name. Here are a few: Hear me Unbreakable love Take this pain away It is something so yeah. Really nice rhythm. Well done

Hi. I'm someguy. :twisted: I would like to welcome you to YWS. I hope you enjoy it here. If you need any questions(which I think you wont have :wink: :twisted: ...

Steamy :lol: Really intense. Poor girl. Very nice. It din't realy go with the flow but I'm not the best poet in this site so... Very nice

Rated R for blood and gore The forests whispers Prologue It is new moon. The wolf’s howl is missing in the forest. The small city, resting at the bottom of ...

It's revenge against men! AND IT'S YOUR FAUALT! Very nice. Blonde haired beauty; cherry red lips, Entertains the chauvinistic, For the pleasure; no the money. Scamming and scheming. It tells ...

It was very short. Not bad, but very short.

It isn't bad.I am a bit confused though.

It is nice,but this isn't poetry. It is like a letter. :( Cheer up :D

Really nice. It is a great beginning. A bit confusing but still good. I think you're on to something. It looks like a good beginning and if it continues, I ...

It's really nice. I like the feather on the book. It really is cool. I never go wrong with black and white.You can't go wrong. :lol: