Someguy

It was too short. I think you could've told more. You didn't give enough detail. You should prenounce all of your words in full words. If you know what I ...

Right... It made me a bit confused. I think I know what you were trying to say. I am the curl of phrase the breath in the wire. A bandaid; ...

It was all right. There is no rythym in this poem. When it Happens It only takes one thing. One thing to make happy. One thing to make me sad. ...

I think it was good. Rupert. Are you reflecting Ron in harry Pottor? A single drop of moisture Rolls down my cheek And falls down To die on my shoulder. ...

Okay thanxs for comments.

Dude. Make paragraphs. Makes it much easier to read. I think the story line is okay. The only problem is you're rushing in your story. Tell more about one specific ...

Is he hiding from somone? Second: well thought of. Really something different. :)

I just liked the first one.

I love the rythym and the flow. It was fantastic until you got to the last stanza. You need to fix that last one.

It is freakashly cool. These monsters in my house under the blouse hidden on my floor next to my bed. Reach to get me I know it can't be THere ...

I love rythym and the flow etc. I think it could use a little bit of work though. Overall it was nice

Not bad. I really enjoyed it. —and I catch a fleeting glimpse, through the emptiness of a hall, where the souls of emperors have been framed— a ghost of a ...

I was good. I just feel something was missing in it. It was good,but a poem is suppose to hook you from the beginning till the end. This didn't have ...

You can add more. It is just a basic description. I was waiting for more. So what if I’m not preppy? What’s popularity got to do with anything? Why can’t ...

It is nice and it rimes. I think it had to be a little bit longer. You should've extended it. Overall it is a nice and different sort of poem.