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Re: Missing in Action
I love the MIA! Brilliant! You know your music, I would like that guitar chords so that I get an idea of the rythym and sound and flow you know. ...
Oct 8, 2007 -
Re: That One Weird Guy...
Damn I like you allready :lol I hope you enjoy it here at the site. Just must warn you that... never mind. You'll find out soon enough. :twisted:
Oct 8, 2007 -
Re: Concequences of Betrayal
I get the idea and I like it, but you need to work on your flow. The tears slide in rivers down my face – A flushed whore.The blade was ...
Oct 8, 2007 -
Re: Critques
I really liked this. It was very funny and it tells you the truth in a weird way. :lol:
Oct 7, 2007 -
Re: Penguin
I think it was cute! :lol: Really nice!
Oct 7, 2007 -
Re: Already Gone
I read it and I think it is really good. The did not really flow. But anyway, it was really nice!
Oct 7, 2007 -
Re: SABLE
Damn I loved this poem! It is so beautiful. :cry: Muddy colored fur gleaming in the light, Your eyes like stars, fallen from night. Tail happily pulsing as I walk ...
Oct 7, 2007 -
Re: Those Games We Play
It could use a little more work. It is a nice idea an is is nice to explore new ways of typing, but there is something missin in this that ...
Oct 6, 2007 -
Re: Lion
Just two problems: The coloring. You can see the drawing patterns and there is no shade in the picture. Overall it is really good. I love the amount of detail ...
Oct 6, 2007 -
Re: Please be Seated
Ha ha. very funny. Really liked this.
Oct 6, 2007 -
Re: circles under my eyes
It was okay. I won't say it was the best. There wasn't any flow in this poem. Sorry,but you should listen to fand. He be very wise and is very ...
Sep 30, 2007 -
Re: Dinostore
Very funny I like the sticker on the dino.
Sep 30, 2007 -
Re: Bittersweet Song-Song Lyrics
Very nice. Can't find anything wrong
Sep 29, 2007 -
Re: BAND.. YAY!!!... Will add more when I feel like it...
I like the first one The others...
Sep 29, 2007 -
Re: Fresh off the Griddle
Freaky...
Sep 29, 2007
