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I don't know. Usually when my imagination doesn't switch on, but I like some of the lines, I have no idea. I look down, eagle's eye. Okay this is a ...

Very cool/funky/awesome picture. I feel so sorry for the boat that has to see it. lol I like it. The detail is nice and it is focused on the sea ...

Hi there. Welcome to YWS. Okay. I like it. Obviously it is the first chapter and so a lot has to happen in the future. Just for interest sake: Is ...

Okay... I don't know. This wasn't really good. I is a little boring. There are some parts that seem to have nice images, but mostly it is dull. It's a ...

Yo!! Welcome to the club! Hope ya like it here as much as I do. Looking forward to comment on your work.

1) Freaky, but awesome. The eyes are nice. 2) Again, the eyes are good. I'd try and focus more on the body though. 3) The eye looks a bit...weird, but ...

I like it. The rhyming is good and that is nice. Elegant intricacy forever engraved, In the walls of vanity. Your emotion is your eyes, Your own critic you can’t ...

First of all. It was very short. Second, you didn't show me the pain. You didn't let me feel it and that is a downfall. It was boring and my ...

I don't know. I like the idea, but I didn't feel your emotions. It was just like everyday where we walk on things we didn't know was there. If that ...

Okay. I like it. Very powerful. The tempo was a bit dodgy, but that's okay. Arrogance blooms with much to spare As I stand before the crooked lair Of mortal ...

I like it. Very nice rhyming in some places and the tempo was good. I just didn't feel it, if you know what I mean. If my lips weren’t cool ...

Very cool poem. I like it. You have creative mind and you used it 100% At five I knew who Marilyn Monroe was, the turquoise fifties number, two sizes too ...

Okay... Honestly- This was not good. It was dull and failed to achieve its purpose, which is to unleash the persons imagination and emotion. This definitely needs a lot of ...

*No comment* I'll be very honest. First of all. " i " should be " I " Do not let this be your downfall... ALWAYS START WITH A CAPITAL LETTER! ...

This is beautiful. The detail is well. I love how much you focused on the body structure. The back legs are good, though the right legs seems a little...funny. Unless ...