Someguy

This was really really good. The ending was brilliant and the message you're trying to show is great and so deep. Really good.

(Stats with the instruments) Yeah! (Instruments) Now...Now it's This is my life I didn't know that it could end like this So here it is, don't be scared I won't ...

This was good, I really liked it. You used a different rhyming scheme and it went well. And when a thief Comes and cuts his neck, He'll fade to be ...

Interessting. You have one hard life. Shame. Anyhoo, I hope u enjoy your stay here on YWS!

The colour is great, the detail, perfect. I really like this painting. Did you make this? If you did, wow I'm impressed.

I think you should've shown more of the backround. Thats all

I really like it, the flow was fantastic and the word choice and all those things and... Really like it. Keep up the good work

This good, with your flaming snakes of tempered steel You lost me there. As I see the ruby rivers flowing from the gorges that you carved in my soul, I ...

Very cool, it gives you the kinda feeling that makes you feel the pain it is feeling. Very cool.

A bit short but very nice. You could add a few extra lines you know, so that it makes a better picture of what you really want to say.

Really corny. I like the last one though

I love the second and the last pictures. It is really awesome!

I love the colours. The snow and the clear blue sky. It is beautiful.

This is really good. I love it. You should leave it just as it is. Good work.

Really awesome, I love the first one