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I absoloutely loved it... Although some people think the phrase "All that jazz" sounds a little out of place, I loved it there. I also loved the part of elliptical ...

okay, lol: Zzap: I don't know if he's a "Handsome" man in blue, but I'll leave that to the reader's imagination... Lol.... bubblewrapped: I see what you mean, I think ...

Thank you so much! (The third stanza is my favourite... why? I have no clue....)

I agree with the reading and reading and reading. It's important to read... A LOT!!!! It helps you develop a style and teaches you how other writers express themselves, therefore ...

I agree, I can't stand blank pages. I see one, and I have to put something on it. Chevy, I meant that when a paper is just left there and ...

I like the colors and the way they stand out. If i were to cut everything that came after the third stanza it would be unfinished, and there is no ...

It's not that I didn't want commentary, in fact i'm pleased people actually took the time to view it, but it does annoy me when people have nothing but negative ...

Although you didn't ourtright use cliches, I felt a lot of what you said had been said before too many times in different ways. It was much too abstract and ...

The only thing I'll take as criticism from you is the green font. Don't worry that'll be changed, I can see why it would bother some poeple, it just happens ...

LOL thank you from branden!!! that's exactly what I wanted to portray! I understand it sounds like from a man's point of view, but I have no idea why I ...

Little did he know that Bobbymajoe had something else planned.

A brain fart is a moment when you don't understand or remember something that is obvious and easy and you would have at any other given time. It's like your ...

Oh, wow! No one likes the rhyming? Damn. Ok, Chevy: if you thought it was pathetic because of the rhyming and I should change that to make it a better ...

The sound perturbs you greatly. It's like the screech of a banshee to you, and you take your hand off of the door. It stands ajar, just wide enough for ...

Upon discovering the theft, Chief Dogwithabiggun called upon his brother...