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Don't worry we weren't going to argue, we were just chatting, and we didn't argue anyway, did we? So relax, it's okay. =)

Just because you did not outright say it does not mean you didn't bring in intothis... And why is it everytime I'm on, you're on? That's so wierd and coincidental. ...

It has a nice message, I agree, but didn't seem very poetic in the sense that you tried to make it a true poem. It sounds more like a quick ...

Very nice, I loved it... Mostly because I think I said something along those lines to one of my friends who was trying to form a relationship with my crush ...

Branden, leave religion out of this, you cannot critique a poem because it offends religion. If you don't like it, don't read it. Simple as that. Other than that, I ...

Snoink: Aunque creo que te guste mucho, no me parace que esa frase fue escrito bien. Lol, just a joke... I never thought that phrase was proper grammer... Anyhoo... I ...

LOL Hialrious, that bit about cats and dogs mating left and right... LOL reminded me of when my dog tried to do it with my cat... Oops, did i say ...

Although I wouldn't say it was perfect, it could do with some grammer checks, I thought it was interesting and even though some people here wouldn't have any idea why ...

Hey, not bad for a beginner... In fact, pretty good! And too true...

It was not wordy, but fantastically expressed. I loved the imagery of the lines: "You never did what I lit you for But still today I am again in your ...

I thinkI shall worship you, because this poem left me awe-struck. Beautifully written, my favourite lines were "The love-moon waxes and the same way, It will wane! Its just strange ...

Purely awesome... I love how you mentioned cotton-burns and all of those other incredible images. EXTREME KUDOS!!!! And a chocolate-chip cookie for you too.

I thought it was.. Uh.. Written purely of and with cliches, and you could've one better than that. I agree with your point however, some of the lines have been ...

The ending doesn't seem to keep up with the same momentum of the beginning of the poem, but i think that's perfect with the poem, considering the last line and ...

I liked what you were trying to portray, I thought it was interesting, but it seemed a little... jumbled maybe? I didn't understand it too well the first time I ...