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Re: A Green Baby named Who? chapter two.
HURRY UP AND WRITE CHAPTER THREE!!! DO IT DO IT DO IT DO IT DO IT DO IT DO IT DO.. hehe luv ya xD
Nov 2, 2010 -
Re: Two Different Worlds *CHAPTER 3*
I was feeling a bit sick while writing this so I kind of gave up after a while, I hope to add more tomorrow or just when im feeling better, ...
Oct 9, 2010 -
Re: Two Different Worlds *CHAPTER 3*
I saw the amazing world once again, and Emelia was laying on the grass, a big smile flashed on her face. I ran over to her and hugged her, she ...
Oct 9, 2010 -
Re: cheating
Hello, Sohpiee here :) I like this poem very emotional and intreging But I cant help but saying that this would seem better with some puncuation :) But still i ...
Oct 9, 2010 -
Re: Clothes
Nice work hehe :)
Oct 9, 2010 -
Re: A Green Baby named Who? chapter two.
LOL!, yayyy more me xD A error that i saw was with this sentence "Ellie" Teneall began as she took a bite of her apple. "Do you really not a ...
Oct 9, 2010 -
Re: Two Different Worlds *CONTINUATION CHAPTERS 2 & 3* FIXING UP
I woke up with a big smile on my face, I haven't had a dream like that in years. My smile quickly faded as I heard the door slam, it ...
Oct 9, 2010 -
Re: A Bisexual High School Love Quadrilateral
I loved reading this, made me feel sad inside but not in a bad way, I like how its all in a good depth of emotion. I find this very ...
Oct 8, 2010 -
Re: A Body Shot
I rather like this aswell, you can kinda picture what happening although it does kind of get a bit confusing in some parts, like wear the man is on the ...
Oct 8, 2010 -
Re: Total Sappy Mush
To Snoink, I rather like this short story, find it cute :) Cliche's shouldnt matter, if the cliche is really how you feel, the same goes with loving someone. shouldnt ...
Oct 8, 2010 -
Re: Fluffy
This poem make me think of my puppy, because he is a maltese shitzu so he's covered with fur, we nick-named him fluffy puppy, I realy like this poem its ...
Oct 8, 2010 -
Re: The pain I give myself
I actualy really love this poem, even thought its about your pet (I hope the bird R.I.P) I feel like I can relate to it aswell, I find this incredibly ...
Oct 8, 2010 -
Re: Two Different Worlds *CHAPTER 1 AND 2*
*CHAPTER 1* Its midnight and pitchblack, and yet again I can't sleep because of the stupid dog next door barking. He barks non-stop but yet my mum sleeps right through ...
Oct 8, 2010
