Sohini

Thanks

Firstly: Please break up the lines, such monstrously long lines don’t suit a poem and are an eyesore. And in these lines: “No walls...just! Eternal nothingness- a tormenting prison.” Shouldn’t

So, is this poem about a triple Siamese/conjoined twin? I didn’t get that. Also, the poem’s quite repetitive and way too short to convey it’s meaning clearly. You should elaborate ...

Heheh...cool!

Hey that was really wonderful. the lyrics was powerful and hard-rock will do it even more!

I 'd say that a short stry collection cvan be pretty good. I've got one published but that's along with my poems as well, and yes it has worked OK. ...

the first one's really amazing but the eye is unclear. i liked the candles shot as well, black and white photos have a charm of their own, well done!

for the first one: 5/10 second one: 9/10 entirely: 8/10

Punctuate and capitalize youur poem. The poem was good but in a repetative kind of way but i enjoued the first line—that's a great opening and a wonderful simile.

Cute! *hugs* Hunny anyone?

the first one is soo beautiful, the ships and the waves gosh the entire shot is breath-taking!!!

I'm back again, this time with a sunrise scene: so what do you think now? I never Photoshop my pics though, cuz I want them to be perfectly natural :D ...

That's so neat and precise—hats off to you both! It must have been quite difficult, wow, this is great!

It's so cheery, somehow reminds me of bubblegum thogh, but really cool!

That's a coconut tree, by the way! Thanks. I'm hunting for more colourful sunsets though!