SoggyPoptart

This is quiet beautiful. I think the shortness of the poem makes it so different and beautiful. I liked the part where you compared the mist to the mother duck ...

Oh who is that who wears the red mask? Does she wear it to hide an ugly nose or unseemly ears? We would not care. This is simply beautiful. Why? ...

Hmm, this is a very interesting start. I actually do feel the way the email in the story was. *Laughs* I think your story is good so far, but it ...

I am very much new to YWS, so please forgive me if I do anything wrong... First off, I would like to say that this story is very impressive. The ...