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Hullo my 255th review! :) Main Points I will be wearing it once." I know that this in dialogue and that it's a child speaking but this is worded very ...

Meshy!! :) I'm here again! :) Main Points One small light poked through... That sentence had some brilliant imagery :D a cloud of fog. Hmm... you just used cloud in ...

This is so cute! :D *Edit* It turns out that your poem really resonated with me because, I couldn't stop thinking about it and what it means. So here's my ...

Hey Deanie, it's Silver here again. This will be a really short review, as I just don't feel like I can review this properly. Firstly, the emotion in this chapter ...

Aria! :) It seems I couldn't resist reviewing this before exams after all >.< First of all... ILLUMINATIONS!?! Really? First you set this in Italy and then you add illuminations ...

Hello Aria :) Here I am in early July, If you receive this any earlier it means that I have died am procrastinating I won't tell you if I liked ...

Hullo Aria! I'm back. Again. :D So it's Riralai again! :) Main Points and for all she knew, he could've I have this strange feeling that you forgot to type ...

Hey Teen! Silver here to review your chapter! :) Sorry I took so long, exam revision and all :D First of all, I have too commend you for how well ...

Hello Deanie... Main Points If only I had my beautiful iphone… I love, love how you continuously keep this theme of Avril's dependency on her phone and basically modern day ...

Iggy! Hi! As soon as I saw the title and description I thought "I have to review this!" :) Main Points the elder’s son What elder? I'm assuming you mean ...

Hey Pinkie!! Silver here with a review for you. :) :) I've read all of your Stephanie Pritchard stories and have decided to leave on massive review here. You're writer. ...

Megsug! You'll never be rid of me! Muahaha! So one of the things I've noticed which is a recurring problem in the novel is an over wordiness in your sentences. ...

Silver is back again to review another of your lovely chapters! :) Main Points “There was a time you would’ve understood this.” This is somewhat strange, I'm talking about the ...

Back again. :) Main Points It's mentioned that the men trying to come on to Qui are: stupider lords. but then: By the looks of your shoes, you couldn’t afford ...

Hey again! Gosh you must be sick of seeing me by now XD So there are spelling mistakes throughout the piece, a missing “s” when it's needed, an “s” when ...