Snowery

Hey Cesare! It's Silver back to review your story! :) So let's get straight to the main points. Main Points “Die!” a warrior yelled, and green sparks enveloped the skeletal ...

Hey Guarav!! Silver here to review your story as requested! :) I really enjoyed this! It was very well written and had a really good feel throughout the whole thing. ...

Hey WritingWolf!! Silver here to review your story as requested! :) So sorry that I took so long! A lot of things came up that I had to deal with ...

Hey NerdBird!! Silver here to review your story as requested!! I know that I'm really late to this, I'm really sorry but real life (AKA uni) got in the way. ...

Hey Lulu!! :) I generally (never actually) review poems but I thought I'd comment on yours. My first impression when I saw your title "Tolerance" was "oh here we go ...

Hey there Cesare!! It's Silver, back again to review your novel! :) :) So on to the nit picks!! I placed my hand on the cold doorknob. It was encrusted ...

Hey!! Silver here to review your story for you today! :) So, I thought that this was an interesting read, you definitely piqued my interest. You handled your dialogue really ...

Hey Forever!! :) Silver here to review you chapter for the scarlet swords!! Ok so I really like this story at the moment. It held my interest all the way ...

Hey Zontafer!! Silver here to review your story!! :) :) I have to start off by saying that I thought this was really good! It really held my interest the ...

Hey!! Silver here to review your story for you!! :) I've read the other chapters so don't worry I know what your story is about. :) I'm really liking it ...

Hey Cesare!! Again. :P Silver is back to review!! Muahahaha!! Ok so this chapter revealed some interesting things. Also as usual your descriptive powers are amazing. Main Points Okay so ...

Hello again Cesare!! I, Silver, am back AGAIN to review your chapter for you. :) :) Firstly another interesting chapter. You really do have a way with descriptions!! Your fight ...

Hey Cesare!! Silver here, back to review you chapter two!! :) :D Firstly, this is a better chapter just because more happens in it and also because you've included a ...

Hey Cesare!! Silver here to review your chapter for you!! :) :) First of all great start. You really created a strong sense of atmosphere and there was some heavy ...

Hey Blackbunny!! :) Silver here for the scarlett swords this review day. First of all welcome to YWS!! :D Your story so far while not gripping has been interesting. You ...