Snoweary

Well, i always love stories about vampires. :D Through your story, i spotted several sentences that doesn't come out right. I sighed, picking up the tray and leaving the room. ...

So, i did clicked the link to read Head in the Clouds and proceed to read your story.I have to admit that i love it. It feels like you are ...

Hello there MissUnmarkedGrave :D Welcome to YWS. I hope you'll have a super time writing here. I am excited to read any of your posts. Enjoy while writing :D -Snoweary

Generally, this story is nicely written. The flow is easy to follow and i enjoy reading it. I can see the bond and love between you and the puppy which ...

I am not going to touch on grammar or wording as it is my major problem in writing. :D I enjoy this poem. One thing i love about your poem ...

I automatically think of Taylor Swift when i read the title :D Your story is quite interesting with no definite ending. Well, every story cannot just end, right? Overall, it ...

Simply great. I love every bit of it. Truly a humorous tumor. The name you've used also make the story more interesting. What is best about script is that i ...

I love the message you pointed out in the poem. But it is so direct. You should make the poem more interesting, letting the readers to think and guess your ...

I read your poem over and over again to find out the story within. Then i knew. The persona wants to kill herself, because of the thought that no one ...

Thank you. You have pointed out my errors and I'll try my best to improve.

This poem force me to think of what it tells.I am not sure what is the message you want to expressed. In what i can figure out is that this ...

What more can I ask form you? when you've given me the last poison, that shall eternally remain. Those beautiful wicked eyes of yours, enthrall me the first we met. ...

When i first saw the title, i was like, " Gaddafi?" Well, i have to say that this is a great poem. I rarely read any poem about politic and ...

This is a quite good poetry. But i wish you could put more elements of poetry such as metaphor and simile and personification. I think instead of using the word ...

I love this poem. One thing for sure, there are people who think and feel the same. " fantasized of death since ten" This is my favorite line. This poem ...