Snoweary

Hello there! Uhh, yeah you really should work on the punctuation :D But overall, i honestly like your poem very much. When you wrote; I would for you would be ...

Hey there :D. C00l!! i totally love the wording. I am not perfect in grammar so i am not going to talk about it :D In my opinion, the message ...

hi there :D I read this poem when it is raining outside. It is beautiful when the rain is gentle. :D well, i love your poem. the Verses is quite ...

i was trying to tell the readers about a man that live like puppets, abandon their own will to do what others told them to/ to please other. They succeed ...

Hey xhellysmx :D I am no pro in poetry but honestly i love this poem. “Are you okay? Will you be just fine?” But none of them never really wanted ...

Cool! I totally love your work. Though i am not sure if The Knight of the Round Table existed in Socrates' era. Every little details you put in the story ...

Hey there Shinobiinfinity :D Wow, i love your story. Usually i won't read short stories unless it caught my attention. You have created a character that typical in detective stories ...

Hey there Lucy :D It is great for you to turn to a new leaf. :D i love to see more of you. Words are meant to be read and ...

Hey there, Cool. I like your poem. Maybe I've lost my magic, grown beyond the friendship of a pen; I love this part the most. I think the flow of ...

Hi there QueenJen! Welcome to YWS and wow, i love your work. Lovely. Simply great and I love every bit of it. I am not going to touch on grammar ...

A random poetry. It express the feeling of a girl who never really appreciate her lover. Her lover's sudden death makes her regret over her actions and makes her realize ...

Well, i love the theory of evolution. First of all, Billions of years have been passed since the formation of this magnificent universe. I prefer it to read, Billions of ...

Your pictures are quite captivating. I like them all but i love three out of eight of your pictures. Speed of light!, In wait for the coming , and Radiate ...

Such a strong emotion you knotted in the poem. I love it. The story telling in the poem is okay and i think it is slightly monotonous. But you managed ...

Your words described the pain and sorrow you had experience. I super love your work! I feel connected to the story. Though we can never put the best words to ...