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Ooo... the edited version? Let me see... how can I say this diplomatically? ME WANNA SEE!

Sir! A problem! Many of the mods are part of SPEW! And I fear Poor Imp might betray us!

ZOMG. Okay. I have tried to hold back my feelings on this for a while, seeing that you're the site admin and I'm the harsh critiquer, but no more! My ...

Um... you're not getting yelled at. This is something we call a critique. So when you put your work into the literary forums, there will be those who come around ...

Hehe! I'm glad to help. Though I must ask... why does she have to fake her death? I have a friend who is breaking free from her parents in a ...

Agreed. Also, to have a truly good poem, you have to have three things: IDEA This is the main idea of the poem. What do you want to say? VOICE ...

Maybe this can help?

Haha... you really DON'T want to try it. Honest. XD

Well, voice is how the writing sounds like, no? So wouldn't concentrating on voice defeat the purpose of your voice shining through? ;)

Wow. I think the creepiest thing about this is how friendly it all seems. Like you're discribing Hello Kitty or something else cute. I think you might have mentioned something ...

Hehe! Well, instead of ranting, try writing something quick about an what you would have ranted about. Let's see what it looks like. ;)

I think so. -- the freak What kind of person do you avoid talking to?

Uhm, forgive me, but why does it matter? I'm fairly sure that the Premier of China has a bet with the President of Iran on this little race... if Snoink ...

Well, twelve plus twelve technically is twenty-three. Less, if you count the ones who've attached themselves to their partners. -- ?? Oh shoot. I know who he is but I ...