Snoink

OR! NAVAR!

Aw... so sad. :( Just a few things to clean up: Yea, my foster parents. Should be "yeah." I’m not sure how I feel about remembering the orphanage. I was ...

Oh dear... Yeah. Now I must a really lame critic and say that I really did like this and I hope that you turn this into a novel. :) Two ...

Haha... well, at least you're honest about it. O_o XD

Only one favorite poet? *flails* Er... yeah. I like Spanish poetry. Silly, huh? In fact, the only reason why I leaned how to LOVE poetry was through Neruda. Yes... soy ...

Ahh... but I like all the neons! :) Nice work! Especially for the title. It really jumps out at you, like a title should. :)

forever

Birds! - the freak Haha... so silly! What music moves you?

barrier

protector

Haha... BUT BREAD PUDDING IS! UNAMERICAN, THAT IS! *cackles*

NEVER! Or... alternatively: NEVERE!

Haha! I'm back! So I love the ending! It's so pretty and lovely and everything and it's so nice. That's the good news. The bad news? The beginning is boring ...

And HA! ZE ZNOINK IZ WINNINGE!

angel ( Um... yeah. )