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Oh, COME ON. Who doesn't know that I'm a sex-obsessed sadist? You just (finally) figured that out? Yeesh... You're a little slow, no? :P

I like the first one too, but the imagery the third one creates is lovely. :)

OOOOH! I love this! It's so weird and haunting and everything that OMG! It's not what I expected at all, but that's fine since it totally exceeded my expectations! And ...

Think of your friends, the people around you. As many of them as you can. Now, how many are of a different race than you? A different religion? Social class? ...

I think you might want to put this in the storybook section. That's where the RPG's (stories that can be added on to by other people) go. ^_^ Storybook section ...

Yuck! Bad poetry is a blight to the soul... teachers should pay attention to the stuff they force others to read. O_o

Glad it helped! :D

Hehe... I pointed that out because there was something lacking about that paragraph, and that lack made it slightly more confusing and less entertaining. You might want to add something ...

Idiots. Oh, and that one language teacher. - Solea How much do you sleep?

militaries

Or bury... ;) Hmmm.... I don't know. Path is a synonym, yes, but it's the brick thing that is clumsy. :?

Aye, I agree! The brick road analogy is very confusing, to put it lightly. When you're writing something, especially poetry, you have to be careful about what you're referencing. Literary ...

Nice to see you back, Sophie! :D I think the weirdest thing about both these poems is their lack of imagery. It's just a bunch of fragments you tied together, ...

Languages. They're much more beautiful and tricky than any mathematical equation. One can be right, but if he doesn't say it right, he's automatically wrong. - Sadie's father Do you ...

*eats kitten on patchwork quilt* I'm interpretting at as either an expression of love towards math or a laugh at poetry. O_o I suck... But you don't! So yay for ...