Snoink

The main weird thing about this poem is that you're telling us what we should be feeling. What you should probably aim for, especially for a suicide poem, is something ...

Chapter 3 At first he wasn’t quite sure what to do. With the demon gone, it grew dark again, the only light coming from the angel. But it was a ...

Hahaha... I think I'm a writer now. I used to be a wannabe for the longest time though because I was more interested in editing than writing and I ended ...

Fallacies are flaws in logic. Basically, if you try to use these methods, you won't get away with them. Why? Because you won't make sense. From stereotyping to personal attacks, ...

Yay! We love St. Augustine. ;) Basically, he came up with the idea of a just war. So basically, it's an acknowledgement that yes, our world kind of sucks. There's ...

What do you mean by 42? And being a christian, my beliefs about life after death are fairly obvious. Hehehe... you need to be more rounded in the great books! ...

Yay! Poets! I write novels. I'm scawy. XD

Together we can drink in the glorious beauty that disappears within moments. Describe what the moments are like, and it'll probably become a little more fluid. Otherwise, lovely imagery! :D

Hehe! Very interesting idea. Try making it so we can see what's going on instead of you just telling us. ;)

No polls! Please! I beg you! Okay. With that said, onto the critique! This is one of those thing that is very internal. We hear about the internal anguish of ...

Er... I usually just take a phrase or something from the first chapter. So "FREAK" was named after "On one side in worn letters was “FREAK” and..." So yeah. Maybe ...

And remember, sometimes the best replacement for said is nothing at all. :) So like: "I have no idea what you're talking about." She rolled her eyes. "About the midterms, ...

Until Till I see "until" as a better bridge word than "till," if that makes any sense...

Hmm... I'm not quite sure about this as a prologue. Usually, the prologues I like are those that are stories within the stories. For instance, let's take a look at ...

Hehehe... don't include polls in your story. Usually, I post in the "I hate it!" option, not because I actually hate the story, but because I hate the poll. If ...