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In the end, it's the people's desiscion what to do with him. They are the people he effected, not us. So it would be wrong for anyone HERE to make ...

I still owe you a critique... *flails* And having a mascochist view of writing is probably not a good thing. ;)

First of all, the grammar is kind of weird. If you have a cool English teacher, you might want to ask about using punctuation, where to put periods, and everything ...

Hehehe... you knew I was going to get to this eventually, right? ;) For this story, I think you're telling more than you're showing. So right now you're giving us ...

Psh. That doesn't make sense. Like, at all. :P

Yay! And she's read FREAK too! *is happy* Yeah, congratulations! :D

I like the dialogue, but it's MUCH too much dialogue and not enough action, so throw in some action within the dialogue and that will make it nicer. :)

Yeah, not all of them were crappy, but some of them were fit to be tied, beaten with a stick, and then killed in some horrible way, preferably by being ...

people should stop writing about him. his ego is big enough already. Hahaha... but this was in 2005, so he only gets a poem per year. :P

Hahaha... I should totally update this.

Hahahaha... you guys are rabid. :P And yay! Red vs. Blue... if that were a full feature movie, it would be flippin' sweet. :)

Ouch. Sony is having a rough year, no?

Eep. This is kind of strange, actually.

That's why you have to live your life in an honest way. Lying about it, either to others or yourself, is just hurting everybody. And, when the truth comes out, ...

Be stupid. -- Daniel Would you give your life up for anyone? If so, for whom?