Snoink

All too frequently, there's this HORRIBLE story or poem and we look at it and say, "No friggin' way." Sometimes, we can just ignore it and let some other person ...

Shall I be blunt? ;) You're going for style, but you're not going for clarity. So, instead of Piers wandering around aimlessly, you are wandering around aimlessly, hoping that perhaps ...

Hehehe... this reminds me of some of the stuff I wrote when I was eleven. Except, I never wrote prologues, and I hated third person. And, of course, my stuff ...

YAY! GO CRYSI! :D

I also think (as has been mentioned countless times) that it's silly to argue with people who critique your poem or when you have, as they say down here in ...

Sometimes, on YWS, you will see a critique that just makes your blood boil and you want to put said-critiquer's head into a blender and just turn it on full ...

Hahaha... poor baby. :P I know my cousin just had her first baby and her mother told her that the baby was ugly. Which was... not cool. It's good that ...

Reviewers have no business telling the authors what they should do with their novel. Besides, if you "demand" things, then people usually do the opposite of what you demand. It's ...

To spruce up Squills a bit, Grif and I have decided to make a sporadically updated webcomic that will eventually include many of the YWS regulars... including featured member, of ...

My pinky. -- the freak I'll give you a hint... it's long and hard and very pliable. Yes! My nose. As you can no doubt guess, I have the worst ...

Not much of a family anymore. And I suppose I like them. I can't hate them, can I? -- Sadie's father Perhaps. I'm not sure. -- the freak I love ...

Does this mean I have to get my arms amputated? I don't think I would like that much. -- Sadie's father Have you ever peed in your pant (or unexpectedly ...

Just daydream. It'll come to you. :D

Hahaha... but, at the same time, if you make everything active, then it's annoying to read. The passive tense can be used in AMAZINGLY good ways. Obviously, you're not going ...

Hahaha... oh dear. I never like Anne in the book. Let's see with you come up with here! :D