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(OOC: Hahah... um... had too much fun with this post? Sorry Fand! XD Grif is taking bets on how soon I'm going to die for this post, haha...) *Ursa, aka ...

Granted, but you're so patient you don't do anything. I wish I won't find so many mouseturds...

Granted, but now you're alone. So very alone. I wish that rodent died a horrible death without touching me!

They scurry beneath the wooden roof their fat bodies glistening with diamonds as they shiver together, their eyes closed, dreaming of Warmth and Sunlight. They have forgotten what their wolfish ...

Yay! Happy birthday! One day closer to death... how does it make you feel? :D

Haha... I don't count pages because font sizes vary. So I do words instead. My word count for chapters runs from 1500-2500. I don't like prologues though -- I'll skip ...

First of all, "ment" should be "meant." Just a little spelling thing, that's all. ;) This seems like you're trying to hard for the rhyme and not enough for the ...

What a creative story! I mean, aliens and wedding cakes? Awesome! The title is very catchy too and the mere subject was so original that it kept me reading throughout. ...

*Ursa, aka Podgy* I stretched out in front of the fire, close enough to be warm and far enough not to have my fur singed and flaming. Which, if you ...

Just edit it (you can see the little button at the top right of your post) and put spaces in it manually. It's a little tricky, but it'll help your ...

I would prefer it not to start at the lovely place. As important as the place may be, as an introduction, it just isn't catchy enough. Instead, start with the ...

Hmm.... I'm thing it might be an ordering issue. Like, the most powerful stuff is put at the end to create a more dramatic effect. Otherwise, you might want to ...

LOL. I don't think it would work with the subject matters I have. But oh well! Don't worry; you're in good company. Lorca, one of my most favorite writers, did ...

Hahaha... yay bubbly!