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Hehehe... the reason why there's hardly any first person narratives is because it's harder to write.

Hahaha... don't be mean, Adam. It might be your idea, but it's free game for anyone since it's so vague. I could probably use it and you wouldn't even notice ...

A little bit of both, I would imagine. Anything's better than indifference. -- Shea Are you embarrassed by your mistakes?

Hehe... yeah, a little. At the time, when it was rainy and miserable, it seemed right, though, without the miserable sky and everything, it doesn't quite look right, LOL.

Hehehe... I got it! Except I didn't... more on that later. I think this might be better, though I'm sure you can make it better still: Giggled gleefully at almost ...

Well... yeah. That sort of showing vs. telling might be applicable to poetry, but in stories, it sort of falls through. If I go on continously about my heorine's eyes ...

Maybe this helps? It's in a usergroup, which means you can't post in it unless you join the usergroup first, but the information there might be helpful to you nonetheless. ...

Didn't I say I shall be frank? ;) Okay. The beginning sucks as it is. I know you want us to feel emotional about Michael and everything, but it's so ...

Or, better yet, make love! That's always a good way to keep everyone satisfied. -- Daniel Nay. War is a constant fact of life, so why should we hide from ...

Hungry for something such as food? Yes. Ravenously hungry, actually. I cannot express how much you begin to want a cheeseburger, coated in saturated fat and juicy cheese when you ...

Name's Shea. And as far as I'm concerned, I'm retired. I don't do quests anymore. -- Shea I'm not quite sure... -- the freak Do you have any animal companions ...

*moves to writing tips* How about a script about some mishaps in school? That's always fun! :D

Well... it's not really that deep. I walk two beagles regularly, and they're really cute but they REALLY hate water. So once, when I walked them in the rain, they ...

Oh come on... we can vote! That's special... now we get to be responsible for the corrupt guys in government! :D

I live in Australia and have just finished high school. Will being going to university next year to do a Creative Writing course. I only decided that I wanted to ...