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Hehe, not Claude! Claudette. ;) Heheh, your tips are fun to read! It gives me ideas for the new stories anyway. It'll be interesting when Shea meets Pearl, LMAO. :D ...

Ever read Dicken's Christmas Carol? Yep! People in the olden days used to write ghost stories for Christmas. Try your hand at it here. :D

For some bizarre reason, I think of carmel. -- Sadie's father And I think of a juicy steak. We should probably get something to eat, shouldn't we? -- Daniel Have ...

Hehe! Funny story. :) Let's go through the details? 1. The introduction doesn't achieve its ironic effect. You have this wording, describing this place as an ideal place, and this ...

... that is truly disturbing. xD

*muses* Well, I think auxillery verb are verbs like "was" "had been" and all that other stuff. So basically, instead of making everything like "he did," "he said" and so ...

Hehehe... I imitated it from Jane Austen. Look at Pride and Prejudice (which happens to be my favorite book of hers, lol) and every chapter there is a short story ...

If someone disagrees with a point another has made, they should say so. It's much better for the author to get two sides of a story. Yeah, but you don't ...

Hahaha... the sad part is, I am confused about the grammar part of the lesson, yet I supposedly did a tutorial about it. XD

...how is it that you can make a rape scene sound so pretty? Nice stuff as usual. :D

Umm...should I use this thread or the other thread? Hahaha... I'm a little confused on that too. XD I think the other thread is for characters?

Haha. Or, you could say, "Screw Grif because he hasn't finished any stories anytime soon and his character development is horrendous, so why am I listening about his comments on ...

Okay! I need three major things of information for my newest project! If anybody can help, I will love you forever. Or something like that. 1. Sheep Do any of ...

Hehe! Okay, so I compiled a list of literary stuff that inspired FREAK in some way or another. :D The Moon is a Harsh Mistress, by Robert Heinlein Farmer in ...

*Ursa, aka Podgy* Okay. That was it. Everybody here was a moron, and by everyone, I mean everyone. And by everyone, I mean...you get the picture. So. Apparently we were ...