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The Incan Shark strikes again, lol! When dealing with cutting, it's best to be subtle about it. I've seen a lot of poems dealing with blood and how it flows ...

Eep! Never delete! But, if you ever want to get anything finished, you have to finish it. It's simple and the advice might sound ridiculous, but it's true! Just keep ...

Sometimes, sometimes not. Like, there's plenty of nonsense poems that exist, not to impress with meaning but to just play with words. But after a while, this sort of poetry ...

Hehehe, limericks aren't really supposed to mean anything, but they're sure fun to say! :D I think the poem has one or two more syllables than it should per line. ...

Please keep this civil. No critiquing critiques... all responses are valid. ;)

Hahaha... I did this and came up with my best draft for a beginning of Unicorn Killers yet! Mind you, it still sucks and needs to be edited to death, ...

Hahaha... but we love John Lennon! The first part, my eyes were wandering, looking desperately for plot. It was the second part I read all the way through because it ...

I'm going to write a ballad about one of my heroes in The Unicorn Killers. Exciting? I think so! Unfortunately, this means I have to know how to write a ...

Hmmm... I thought that the character development was a little over the top. First of all, why would Lily think Rose is her friend after everything they do? I don't ...

NO ORKS? *stifles a cheer* Like the first one... it looks like she has a hula hoop of music. :D And the harpy also looks neato... though slightly creepy. Then ...

Hehehe, with the roots like that, it looks like the tree is jumping on a trampoline! :D And Wacom tablet? Oooo... yummy. :D

Since this doesn't seem to be much like a poem, I'm moving it to the welcome forum. ;) Welcome!

Tarin's about thirteen or so... young enough to be young and considered a child, perhaps, and old enough to be lucid. But little kids are surprisingly smart. I wouldn't hold ...

Yay! Thanks so much for reading and commenting. And it is kinda depressing, I suppose. >< Not really the happiest poem around anyway. But I'm glad it's depressing without being ...

If there was time-traveling, this is it fingers lingering over embossed letters on cheap hallmark cards -- Christmas has come, rejoice! And in the corner scrawled out by an arthritic ...