Snoink

And, with the dictionary, the thesaurus was closing in fast! Quick! Rapidly! Swiftly! Hastily! Speedily! Briskly! Fleetingly! Nonslowly!-- WHACK! Didn't we give you an IV of George Orwell? "Ugh?" "He ...

Okay... so people kept asking me whether I read Kurt Vonnegut Jr. and I kept wondering who he was. Well, I finally decided to read him. So I went to ...

Okay... I've updated it with all my revisions. Better?

Hola! Me llamo Snoink (en YWS) y soy una moderadora de YWS. Escribe un poco español, pero estudié solamente para dos años. Bienvenidos a YWS! :D

I love the way Kyle was introduced because it was so in character that it seemed to flow. Like, he got his way. The introduction was also rather inviting. This ...

Her exposed back—bereaved from the duty of making love—heaved, frightening Kyle in the way young boys are frightened of seeing porn for the first time. I thought this description seemed ...

Usually, try to ignore it. Eventually, it does go away. -- Daniel If asked to slaughter an animal, what would you do?

Hahaha... you already know I love your work. Just a question... the only random part seems to be the very introduction. What exactly is her motive for suicide? She doesn't ...

Women should stand up to the oppressive men who run our government today! It's bad enough that we have no voice, but for slavery to exist in such a blatant ...

Hehehe, I'm going to critique a critic's critique of my critique! :o ... or explain myself better, anyway. :P Eeeh, okay, I'm not goint to critic a critic, BUT -I ...

Welcome to YWS! I hope you have fun here, both in giving comments and receiving them. ;) A few general comments: The word "grotty" should be shot in any story. ...

I'm not shallow! -- Sadie Dude. If he doesn't look good, then he doesn't look good. -- Pearl First of all, you got to have some nice legs. Everything else ...

I think teachers try to teach meaning in only one way because they want to have people know that meaning can and does exist. However, I don't see how they ...

Never trust a unicorn. -- Pearl Random girls that pop out of nowhere and will not shut up should be avoided for health reasons. -- Tristram Apparently, having two lovers ...

Hehehe, I think you're better as a novel writer, Adam. ;) ...I should probably explain that, shouldn't I? Okay. Look at the scope of the story. It spans, not just ...