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Moved it to a place where it will get critiques! And posted the story on the post. Remember, if you want to have your story critiqued, don't put it as ...

FINISH SOMETHING. *stabs* ;)

I hate doing maps. BUT I *will* research medieval times, blacksmithing, shepherding, feudalism, weaving, etc., just to get the main things. Then, after know how the society works and what ...

Check out the date. I wrote this six years ago. ;) I laughed SOOOO hard when I read it. It really is quite terrible -- though it's funny. I was ...

Yay! It's a novel thought... having sympathetic characters you can relate to. ...ouch. Pun not intended.

The fishy one kicks butt. The other one isn't as gripping. :P

Looking for an Idea – 1/16/01 I stared at the blank piece of paper in front of me. Last night I really wanted to write. This morning I have gotten ...

I hope you had a nice sugar high from cake! :D

I'm a democrat, but I hope so much that Clinton doesn't win the primary. For the sake of the democratic party I really just hope she doesn't win. She will ...

I have to say, I like your other poem better. This is very sporadic, almost disturbingly so, flitting to one topic to another very quickly. Not sure I like it... ...

AH! You should go outside! Out! Out! Out! *beats with stick*

Aw... this is pretty stuff! I never realized you wrote poetry before. ^_^;;

First of all, this is a lovely poem, BUT you need to do spell check to make it even lovelier! And then, after spell check, read it yourself and fix ...

Okay... let's do a visualization. Pretend that poetry doesn't have any meaning whatsoever. Annoying, isn't it? Okay. Now picture a poem that has tons of meanings in it, but so ...

Heheh... it sounds like a Christian rock song. Was that your intention? Also, I moved it to Lyrics. ^_^;;