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Eep! You go from second person to first person without warning! Like... right here: It ends up like this: you’re twenty years old and lying on a couch with your ...

I love you.

Eep... I told the people that I were dedicating it to them. XD Yay! A published author! Has it been printed yet?

IT'S UNCLE BEN! OMG. OMG! MICHIEL IS ABOUT TO TELL UNCLE BEN! *dies* Not that I actually know this, but... um... come on! I mean, Schafter is obviously being played ...

In Martin Luther King's Letter from Birmingham Jail, this was a quote: But the judgment of God is upon the church as never before. If today's church does not recapture ...

“Apologies, master.” Patrick said... You should be killed for that mistake. I'm serious. It's like, "Hahaha, watch me write -- and be grammatically incorrect at the same time!" This is ...

That's just sick.

Don't be so preachy. This is just reeking of "I'm going to tell you how you should feel and how you should look at life." For poetry, this is a ...

What time period?

Aw! Thank ye very much! I used that line too... fun stuff. :D

Hahah! Me and Brad? What a match! Though the words "Til death do us part" would be very apt, methinks. But! With Crysi! She'll probably be a good mediator... hmm...! ...

This seems to be more of an outline for a poem than anything. Try to add on to it more. For example, for me the questions are not that important. ...

Yay! I can use a bunch of musical knowledge I have in the back of my mind for the critique and you would understand it! Imagine, if you will, a ...

MWHA! *pounces*

In smaur's excerpt, only the bold sentences are fragments: The ninth is a suicide. Again. Jumped off a roof and plummeted to his death. No relatives, no friends, nothing. They ...