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Hahaha... not a poem. I'm moving this to "poetry discussion."

Um... I think I am possibly going to hide in a hole and do chemistry, physics, and differential equations instead.

Amen!

...no. Just no. I mean, I can see why people would like it, but HONESTLY, it's too cumbersome. And what about Johnny Hart? He's not going to like this at ...

Hehe. Once you get out of the angst of high school teachers who don't understand you, you run into the agents and publishers that don't understand you. Scary stuff, really.

*moves to Other Fiction* Also, instead of shouting out to mods, feel free to PM us. ;)

DUDE. Keep it alive. Geez, people are stupid.

Well... if you can't use dreamweaver, the simplest thing would be to use notepad (for windows) or text wrangler (for macs). There, you can come up with a very basic ...

Oooo... this looks pretty awesome! If I wasn't hosted already, I might look into this. Maybe some of our other writers would be interested?

Sorry Tassen Spellbinder but I just had to bring it forward here, So okay the Monkey won, by 3 or something right? Tassen Spellbinder came up with the brilliant idea ...

Flip a coin between A and B? ;)

I think many of the adjectives are misplaced. For instance, "gusty." I like the word, but it really does nothing for the poem. Instead, I would like to see more ...

First of all, the prologue is like a script description of a guy. Seeing as you're not doing a screenplay, drop it. It's more interesting in the first chapter anyway. ...

I don't know if this is true or not, but the wording is such that the main character appears to be female. I'm not quite sure why, it just screams ...

I don't like the first two lines because they seem superflous. I know you're talking about God, but it really isn't necessary to say this as obviously as you're doing, ...