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Aw... being depressed sucks. :( But! I shall critique nonetheless. I'm glad you're putting your depression to a good use like this. :D First of all, I like the theme. ...

Yay! This was refreshingly funny. One thing that you might want to do is to space it out into paragraphs, because some of our critiquers go into spastic fits when ...

Yes, I like it too. Very descriptive. :D You're definitely going to want to add more in this and maybe post it in the story section. One very nit-picky thing ...

Er... you might want to think about making this grammatically correct, i.e., put punctuation and capitalize things. And why is it so colorful? Okay... onto the story! I like the ...

I have to say... the duckie picture is my favorite.

XD 10/10 for originality! I would like to see a fanfic of this. ;)

Search Google on how to write query letters and then panic because you're not a published author and therefore you can't brag about your credentials? :lol: Okay, seriously? Tell them ...

Critique other people's work and make sure it's a good critique. There are several writing tutorials on how to write good critiques -- use those. Also, if it helps, find ...

Nobody so far. I finished my query letter, but I need to write my synopsis. But... I can do that over the spring break, hopefully.

...this remains one of my favorite tunes on YWS to this day.

Just wondering... is there anyone who has experience in multiple POVs who would like to give their two cents in?

Here lies Karina Who went beserk After too much physics Made her ∫F•ds

A book about propaganda... XD

If we do catch you stealing others' work here, that earns you an automatic ban. So... we try to discourage it as much as possible. By putting it on the ...

KYLE: As long as I can come back in and by my diaper bag. I think I’ll get the pink one, just to spite you. [gives a death glare] I ...