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Actually, I didn't think it was that bad, LMAO. In the mythology I am working on, I have someone who is a half-breed... and not just human/elf, but human and ...

y6hn9ow3e43 is t5oo0 swhyo0r5t5. (Translation: My nose is too short.)

This doesn't belong in Other Fiction. *moves to Writing tips*

It's too bad you can't just say #000000 and everybody knows what you're talking about, LOL. It would make things so much more precise. ;) But thanks for the links! ...

Since you're fifteen, you got a good chance. Check out some children's or teens literary magasines and start there. And, if you have a high school, definitely try to get ...

Shea is the foil to Pearl. When Shea is gone, Tristram is. Or something. *remains confused*

We don't have a horror forum. However, if the horror story has science fiction or fantasy overtones, it goes there. If it has an intense romance, it goes in romance. ...

This is much more like a song, actually... a song with dancing. Which is pretty cool, if you think about it. With that said, some of the parts don't really ...

*hugs a critiquer* Anyway, lovely tutorial about commas! They are so under-valued... it's quite sad. :D

I think it's slightly confusing, actually. The narrator is going back and forth... one minute, she loves him, the other she's laughing at him, and... yeah. Confusing. Maybe if you ...

This is nice. I like reading your poetry. :D And I love the martyrs and tribal drum parts because they contrast very nicely with each other. :D

Hehehe.. and this is a closed forum, so for all our aspiring poets who don't want their work to be stolen, this may be what you're looking for. ;)

Hello and welcome t o YWS, first of all! :D I've been reading a lot of freestyle poetry lately, so this poem is pretty awesome to me. I like the ...

I think it's possible that someone who is as bad as Hitler can get to heaven. But I also think that heaven is beyond our wildest imagination and that anything ...

Dood. Speeling es over-ratted.