Snoink

Er... put this in the poetry discussion next time. ^_^

Depends how much spare time I have? Lately, not much at all. It's rather pathetic.

Snoink pokes in, sees how crazy it is, and then runs away screaming.

..where am I on that list? And why is Sanjaya's hair there? O_o LOL!

YES! I knew you would get attention soon. You're very good. :D

Hahaha... not gratuitous! Simply... uh... more cohesive? But don't worry. You can post that kind of stuff on YWS, so as long as it's rated, it's okay. ;)

:D Wow. That's awesome. WE SHALL TAKE OVER THE WORLD!

DUDE. “You deprived me, and now you're going to pay for it," he said, lowering himself to her, "Make any noise, and I swear to God I'll kill you,” Tears ...

Miscellenaous Sometimes knowledge just does not fit into a tidy place. That's on the YWS Knowledge Base method... you might want to change it so that it's spelled right. :D

Pause, look at the class, and then continue reading. But really. Pauses are good.

Two lines I have problems with... you're killing me on the inside It's never the end of the road The reason why I have this problem is most of the ...

Aw... lol. Well, seeing as I liked the second part better because of more vivid imagery and a personal touch, put that more into it? ;)

Sadly, we don't have a center feature, so I took that out for you. If there's any other formatting issue, you can always add it yourself. ;) This was a ...

Hehehe, this was fun. :D Just a small suggestion... instead of calling it "IT" maybe you can treat it as a name and calling it "It." ...that had too many ...

Thankus always Sammus! That one sentence is edited, thanks to you. :D And I'll keep the other stuff in mind when I tackle Unicorn Killers, all right? :D