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What about Kyle Jr.? Didn't he have something to do with the end? ;)

Eh... he's asking for critiques, so it would be better in Other. ;)

Oh Love, my Lord, be brave Ignore the world’s cry Go quickly to thy grave How could you, a man, crave To face death eye-to-eye…? Oh Love, my Lord, be ...

I would say that having a comletely evil character is impossible. The gut-wrenching feeling comes, not by the character acting evil but rather you recognizing that you would have done ...

Hooray! They're going home! Whales lost in Calif. river making progress again toward Pacific By Marcus Wohlsen ASSOCIATED PRESS 11:42 a.m. May 29, 2007 VALLEJO – Two whales lost between ...

Ahhh... Well, I know "Speak" by Laurie Halse Anderson has to do with rape of minors... and it's a pretty good book. ;)

You already have a post just like this in the lounge. *Locked*

What kind of genre would you like?

Any poem fits into other poetry. That's the beauty of it. ;) Okay! So the poem! I thought it would be better fit as dialogue or somewhere else in a ...

Yay! We love redheads. :) I like your style. It's very original. And OMG! Nice shading! ...and yep, that's my bad art critique. But it's really cool.

... :o Welcome to YWS! And I'm not crazy... really!

Ugh... too much physics for me right now. Still, you can always insert graphics in this piece by going to , downloading the pictures to the server, and then posting ...

Yay, we love experiments! This one didn't really hit it's mark though. I think you can keep the repetition of the first line, if you so desire so you can ...

I think FS is referring that Macs seem to be part of the cool group of computers that might be superior, but they are just computers in the end. Still, ...

I like this poem better than your other ones, but it could still use some tweaking that makes it better! First of all, proper punctuation can make the difference between ...