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4/10... dropped what?

I always did wonder about how you became so good, and now I see why. Nice story. And good going in spiting that teacher! :D

...well, they DID agree to their terms of service. There are plenty of places that they can show their work without this mess happening.

XD This is a movie shoot, isn't it? Funny! And I love the line "speech bubbles" since it is so... fictional, and yet this poem seems very real. Nice job! ...

I'm... very right, lol.

Or we can give you advice on your own story? :P *Moved to Writer's Corner*

Hello and welcome to YWS! :D First of all, I want to say that your idea was very creative. It sort of reminds me of some of the stories I ...

Hahaha... that comment on the end is getting annoying. :P Anyway! I like the other poem better because it has more pretty imagery. This one... seems to be telling us ...

*Moved to Randomness*

Awww.... we love poetry! And stories... you should complete your novels so we can read them. :D Welcome to YWS!

Hahaha.. I know about it, but the little red marks it makes on Word makes me want to edit it more. :P Thanks for the tip anyway!

I liked it, but you need to fix the typos. ;) A mysterious and magical cretaure [should be creature], comes to us in dreams and stories always eluding us. Breating ...

It looks like this is a joke that was lengthened into a full short story. Unfortunately, I don't think you have transcribed it properly. For example, when you tell the ...

XD Wow... that's nice adaptation. :D

Thank you for all your very excellent comments! They were very insightful and hopefully I'll be able to follow them. ;) Mad>> Ay! Someone else pointed out the forced rhyming ...