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...worship what?

Hehehe, you're much improved than you were when I last critiqued you. In fact, I was kind of stunned by the improvement... you wouldn't think that much improvement in that ...

Ooh, I love this! Of course, I'm going to love anything that involves stars or sticky notes or stickers in general. Wow, I'm so mature. :roll: And I bet Nate ...

NO TWINS! :o

Very!

Why didn't I see this before? :P Oh well! As usual, I love your stuff and they make me feel very happy. With that said, I shall rip apart this ...

Yes! YWS allows you to advertize your website in a nice convenient place anyone can see! Add your website up. ;)

Ah! It's tied again. More help?

Nah, the word is treble.

That's it. When I become a best selling author, I am soooo going to get that house.

The brain is a very strange thing indeed? I wouldn't try it and I would want more research on it before it gets released in the public. O_o

LOL! For FREAK, I remember telling a story in present tense, just to liven things up. So a character who wasn't very grammatically correct just ranted in first person/present tense. ...

Um... it's tied. Help?

*hands kitten* You deserve it! :D

Ay de mi! Pesky little errors... well, I fixed it. Hopefully it reads better now? ;)