Snoink

Another English major! Nooo! ;) Anyway... hope to see your stuff! I hope I won't scare you away from writing. :P

Mwhahaha... I recognize you! Nice to see some more musicians on YWS! If you haven't yet, look on joining the "Band Geeks" usergroup. ;)

Hahaha... good idea. ;) What kind of stuff do you like to write?

Uh oh... not the emo poetry! ;)

Actually, I don't think we have any Jennifers... you can be the first! :D Welcome!

Don't rhyme. In fact, scrap the whole poem, scrape the rhymes, and try again. Good poetry doesn't have to rhyme. It just doesn't. If the rhyme comes out forced, then ...

I don't know. I know lots of English spellings from reading English stuff, but I wouldn't be able to tell you the differences between them if you asked me. I'm ...

Ahhh... much better! :D

Snoink sidles up to Poor Imp. "You don't need to sleep to fall off bar stools. Look at this!" Snoink falls off a bar stool. "See? I'm not sleeping!"

Okay.. you definitely have a grasp on language and stuff so I'll just tell you that you have a potential to be a great poet (you being a good poet ...

"STRAWBERRY SODA! FILL ME UP WITH SWEET SUGARY GOODNESS!" Grif turns to Nate. "Isn't there a drink limit?"

It's rated properly, no worries! :D And... oOooo... interesting. The only thing that really bugs me is that the ending seems super quick, like you wanted to get away from ...

Whee! You have a poem very much like a poetry master's poem! :D This poetry master is known as Edgar Allen Poe and his poem that is somewhat like yours ...

Hmmmm... In this case, while it is an okay riddle, I would rather you not say directly at the end, "This is an enigma" partly because the title says it ...

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