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Much better! Something to look out for... it seems like you wanted a more old-fashioned approach to dialogue and narrative, and for the most part you did that. However, there ...

It had a good beginning and I liked the simplistic feeling of it, but the ending was too short and too long at the same time. Too short because the ...

Mwhaha. You have a very interesting selection of author names! That is... I only knew who Philip Pullman was. Oh well. ;) I was flaky too, but several members of ...

Aw.... but we love stories! :o Oh well. Welcome to YWS! :D

As this is a discussion of the ethical implications of prenatal sex selection in China, the United Kingdom, and the United States, each with their own societal and government structures, ...

Though sex selection techniques have been around for millennia, they have never been this precise before, and that is beginning to make people concerned. As technology continues to progress, many ...

...haha. It would figure i would happen now. :P

Parents have always been curious of the gender of their children during pregnancy and some have even wanted to be able to choose the gender of their child. In the ...

Hehehe, you have achieved your purpose of the poem, Fair Ari. ;)

Are you graduating this year? Step up! :D

Kitty, since it makes sense that she should go to her best friend's place. We love best friends! :D

Ahhh! Why did I not see this? *snuggles story* Hehehe... I may be sleep-deprived or something, but there were some things I didn't get. Did you and "Fucker" actually go ...

First thing I noticed was that your poem relied too heavily adjectives and adverbs. Looking back at the poem, it's not that there's a lot of adjectives or adverbs... in ...

I liked the beginning sentence because it made me interested in why she was curled on the branch of a tree. The rest was... meh. First of all, maybe it's ...

Hmmm... I think the rhyming is a little too forced for this to work. Also, instead of just telling us what is happening, show it to us. What images could ...