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Re: recommend me something
I love Break, Blow, and Burn , which is a collection compiled by Camilia Paglia. Not only does it have some awesome poems in it, but also her analysis of ...
Jun 14, 2007 -
Re: You Can't Take Your Gold to Heaven
It's too abstract. Who is this old man, why does he deserve all this hate from the narrator? Since you don't describe what's going on, it leaves me apathetic. And ...
Jun 14, 2007 -
Re: DRAGON
Holy crap, this is old. Write a revision of this poem again. I wanna see the difference. :D
Jun 14, 2007 -
Re: Yet another God question
Faith does not make people more moral, otherwise all athiests would be in prison. This is actually the opposite, atheists are less likely to be charged with a crime than ...
Jun 14, 2007 -
Re: Principle's Death
Yay! :D Thanks a lot! So... awesome and stuff. Emphasis on the stuff! :D Okay, okay, very morbid stuff. As in OMG, SUPERMORBID. Still! What I liked: I loved the ...
Jun 14, 2007 -
Re: Dancing Girl
These are my favorite lines: Red songs sung by blue girls meshed together The gangs are being brought together by dancing? Awesomeness!
Jun 13, 2007 -
Re: Flames of Lecraesa: Chapter 49 (Beads)
The following is the last chapter of Flames of Lecraesa which I have been worried over lately. It does not require too much explanation, and, even if you have not ...
Jun 13, 2007 -
Re: Prostitutes, Lovers, Marriage, and all that fun stuff...
Will it be all right if I PM my answer? Of course! Thanks for all the responses so far. :D
Jun 13, 2007 -
Re: Prostitutes, Lovers, Marriage, and all that fun stuff...
Unicorn Killers will apparently deal with prostitution, marriage, and lovers! Fun? Not really. But still! Since I have someone going from our world to a world where things are slightly ...
Jun 13, 2007 -
Re: Speak
OMG, Speak was one of the only books that I picked up in the bookstore and my mom literally had to rip it away from me, lol. It was totally ...
Jun 12, 2007 -
Re: Jennafina's B-Day party
...here's a kitty for you! :D
Jun 12, 2007 -
Re: Abused
Give the first two stanzas an agonizing, horrible death. Please. They are the definition of navel-gazing . With that said, once those two stanzas are over, the rest of the ...
Jun 12, 2007 -
Re: Jennafina's B-Day party
Yay! Happy birthday! :D
Jun 12, 2007 -
Re: Whats your favourite book?
FREAK, apparently. :P No... I really don't know. There are so many awesome ones... why limit yourself to one favorite? :?
Jun 11, 2007 -
Re: She thought, he knew
The main thing about this that makes me cringe is the ending. The ending has no conclusion. We don't know what his feelings are... in fact, she and he are ...
Jun 11, 2007
