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Hahaha... of course. Sometimes you can bring personality to the character through description. So... He was standing at the top of the staircase, wearing a fine suit, both of his ...

Okay, I've never really understood how to write this. I don't even know where you put the commas in. Someone, please explain it to me! Which do you say: A) ...

More words that get confused: apart / a part If you are apart from something, you're separated from it. If you are a part of something, you are within it. ...

Three words: GAH. Okay, so I reread the finishing thing and... yeah. Not good. So what you basically have is this intense intense INTENSE story and it slows down and ...

I'm not convinced. If this is an argument, I would mark it down many many points because it just answers the questions without giving evidence or any reason why we ...

Waffles>> for some reason I thought you were a squirrel. O_o

I bought a used book on the internet and there were all these... pen markings on it. It drove me crazy! This time when I bought something on Amazon, I ...

*moved to Randomness*

The only way I finished stories was I got completely obsessed with them. So you'll see plenty of ramblings on FREAK on my blogs, lol. For you, you might want ...

*snuggles mix* Hurray! Guttersnipe hath been worked on!

:D I was just listening to this! One of my favorite break is "Days Like This" which is excerpted and suddenly it goes into "Modern World." At first, when I ...

...yeah. Try again?

To be far this isn't really the poem Whence critted. But I think we can all agree Adam's poem = doo doo poo poo. Don't sulk. :P *Thread Locked*

Okay, so there was this one time that I saw this work on YWS and it was SOOOO BAD. Like, literally, all my neurons were firing at the sight and ...

Couldn't you have them ignore each other or be nice to each other and secretly backstab each other? That might be fun! :D