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Re: Connected?
NATE'S MARRIED???
Aug 2, 2007 -
Re: Only in America...
XD
Aug 2, 2007 -
Re: writing for the sake of using awesome words
Hahaha, I do that all the time. I mean, Alvin Pinky is a prime example of that. And I don't know why I do it, but it's just so fun ...
Jul 31, 2007 -
Re: To John Donne
Your words to me are so-- crass. They make me want to scream and laugh tossing aside my white dress as you come down as golden rain While I, trapped, ...
Jul 31, 2007 -
Re: Variables in Math
Yeah... Incan is right. Though many people believe that time is the fourth dimension, mathematics does not state that time has to be any dimension. Though I realize that might ...
Jul 30, 2007 -
Re: allie68: lol ok cya.
I don't think this really works , especially as a quiet horror piece. For one, the use of the chatroom makes your setting a lot less real. We don't really ...
Jul 29, 2007 -
Re: The First Day of Spring
This seems too prosaic, especially the first four lines. Unfortunately, the first four lines are supposed to be what hooks you in. The rest of the poem is much better ...
Jul 29, 2007 -
Re: The Unicorn Killers - Old, decrepit first draft thingy
Mat>> As long as you don't copy it verbatim, I can't see why I should be offended, lol. The story will go quickly haywire... you'll see. In any case, I ...
Jul 29, 2007 -
Re: Blogging Tips?
Don't talk about FREAK constantly -- that's a sure way to get your readers bored. ;)
Jul 29, 2007 -
Re: Grrrrr i'm pissed at some people on here
rite wat u want an jus ignore every1. ure teh best.
Jul 28, 2007 -
Re: The Runners
Jonah checked his watch. His date, fresh from the internet, was coming any minute. He already knew her – he had been in her house twice since she was foolishly ...
Jul 28, 2007 -
Re: x, y, z, can't function in time
At the mountain’s peak, my knees don’t strike "Don't strike" doesn't sound right... can you think of something that doesn't use the word "don't"? when the ground splits and the ...
Jul 24, 2007 -
Re: Conquering Boredom
Chapter 2: Charlie’s Torments “Oh. My. Gosh. You are so insufferable!” said Charlie to the witches. “I hate you! You never understand me!” “Yes we understand you,” they said. “No ...
Jul 24, 2007 -
Re: Conquering Boredom
Chapter 1: The Story Begins It was a dark and stormy night. The cloaked warrior stumbled into the tavern. He was wounded – badly. “Give me a beer,” he rasped. ...
Jul 23, 2007 -
Re: Conquering Boredom
The Prologue The world was dark when Lord Bore took over the world. Before, everything was bright, but now it was opaquely dark. Before, everyone was rich, but now they ...
Jul 23, 2007
