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The sad thing is that I was just going to let this run until I came to the part in the book where the baby is born, but alas! It ...

but who took all the pictures? My sister. She's known as Sgt. Salt on these forums. ^_^

* I took the picture... my sister made/ate the sandwich.

Hehehe, you have to watch out with la famiglia. If you're nice, they'll give you cannolis. :D And really... who can refuse?

Would that be this link?

OMG! I LOVE THE FIRST ONE! It's so... them. LMAO. XD Poor Mesh. XD

Don was disturbed. He loved his cushy job.. it was all he had. So, because he now lost it, he would kill himself. "My life is a story not worth ...

Mwha! Because we love SF trips... Us at the Shakespeare garden, because obviously we have to be in the Shakespeare garden because we're writers! And Jack's starving, but that okay, ...

LOL! This is funny. :D The only thing I might suggest is changing "walky-tocky" to "wicky-talking." But I'm weird like that. :P Anyway, cool stuff.

Hello and welcome to YWS! I'm going to move to "Other Fiction" because it really belongs there, and it'll probably get more traffic there anyway. Okay? ^_^ Ahhhh... lovely grammar. ...

Hahahaa... the first one looks like there is a girl who is trapped underneath a desk! Like, a ghost or something. The shoe? In a world of books? Exciting! Anyway, ...

Hahaha, this was cute. Not that I really watch Dr. Who (only saw one episode) but I like the dedication you put in this poem. :D I like the rhyming ...

This seems like a run on sentence split into line breaks to become poetic. Remeber: punctuation is a good thing, and it is essential in poetry so you can shape ...

Wombs are NOT in guys. Wombs are in girls. So use a body part that is different. This story is really really confusing. I mean, the parts don't seem to ...

Ay, I understand this perfectly. But at the same time, you can do so much more with this! Right now, you're just saying the same things over and over. You ...