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Haha! Well, at least I had a brownie!

Haha, I noticed that. I was like, "Why is he living there?" But oh well! You can't find me through whois though! I think.

Haha, I knew he would give us clues soon! Just like Carmen San Diego...

Don't go from third person to first person. It's just... not cool. For instance, you have this: William knew that he had no chance of wining the fight, but being ...

The internet?

I looked up "Nathaniel Lee Caldwell" and apparently, he resides in a lot of cemetaries. O_o

Well, he'll give you clues and stuff so you can hunt him down, most likely.

I think he's like Carmen San Diego and doesn't have an address! :o

Maybe! Which country, providence, and time setting is this in?

Pretend you're doing a thorough critique on somebody from YWS. The grammar is good, which astounds you and, because it's so good, you're going to do a thorough critique on ...

Eep. This was weird. I had no idea it was going to turn out the way it did, because you said "the city" and automatically that brought forth the image ...

Hello and welcome to YWS! :D A couple of things, before I begin the critique. First of all, if you want this story to be on the front page (and ...

Well, you already say after the aligators "I exclaim, not constraining my emotions into words, but saying it with my mind." So I don't think you need anything more than ...

Go to this forum: It's at the bottom of the community forums. And please remember... just because you apply doesn't necessarily mean you will be accepted.

Sam said plane crash? I thought it was divorce. Or something. O_o Anyway, it was cute, but I guess I wasn't that touched, because chocolate is poison for little ducks, ...