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“Is he ready?” “Yeah.” “Bring him in.” They brought him in. The doctor leaned close to the man. “Can you see me?” No answer. “Can you hear me?” No answer. ...

I know I'm coming in at a great moment and, since I haven't read any of the rest, I have no idea what is happening. I just wanted to point ...

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Mars! I want to see the canyon that is bigger than the Grand Canyon. ;)

*Moved to The Lounge*

Yes... the story that my dad nearly killed me for. But I shall critique it! It was a slightly bitter memory for her here in the graveyard, probably owing a ...

There are Star Wars fans, yes, but we already had several usergroups on very specific topics (HP and LOTR) which are somewhat dead, due to inactivity. It's not the lack ...

Eh... I think it would be better if it were more prosaic. :P That is, I think this would be better if converted to a story. Cut it down to ...

You don't have to create something that you know a lot about -- you just have to create a usergroup that has a subject you love as the main idea. ...

This has too many far-flung adverbs thrown about to make it powerful and too many strong verbs to make it powerful as well. Remember: brevity is the soul of wit. ...

I did like it. Dono said that the deaths were random, but I didn't really think it was very random. I thought more people would die, but not a lot ...

My mom ate something with an open-faced English muffin, but it had teryaki sauce and pineapples and ham. But I don't like pineapples much, so I decided to come up ...

First of all, welcome to YWS! Remember to rate your story, because then it'll appear on the front page and everyone will be able to see it. Also, I'm going ...

Hahaha... oh dear. We have quite a few banninated members. Anyway, I'm part of Big Brother, which means that I'm a scawy mod. RAWR! But, more importantly, I am a ...

But... I like lines. Anyway, I used to carry a couple of notebooks wherever I went, but... it didn't work out because I kept missing details and everything that, if ...