Snoink

I think he does... but I also think it's a joke. XD

I'm sixteen posts from my 1666th review! Because this is a very sadistic number, I was hoping that this critique would be a very sadistic critique. Or helpful. But we ...

Yeah, definitely keep it "there are" instead of that made up rhyme you have. I don't really like the beginning and ending lines, the pitter-patter ones. The beginning one, I ...

The thumb looks weird, so maybe adding some wrinkles or shading will help it be less straight and more curved.

This part is the most interesting part of the poem: Tick tock, Tick tock. Time is passing by And all I do Is sit here looking Out my window Watching ...

Hehe, your sister's boyfriend is funny. ^_^ Tell him that he must come up with another rhyme for clog so he can have another line. It'll make everything sound so ...

Don't have him rub his toes -- this might make the toes fall off, and that is bad. And cut this part out, "and prayed he would live to see ...

I name it Alfred. :)

Brutality? Sign me up! :D Um yeah. Lucy already dealt with grammar and stuff (I think--I only skimmed it) so I might be repetitious, but yep! Continuing on... The air ...

Points are for bragging rights. Look at the information desk forum for more info on that. ;) And pictures can be either downloaded to YWS or hosted off a remote ...

First of all, I must comment... you have to uncheck "disable bbcode" if you want the pictures to show up. It should be on your post. Anyway, I fixed it ...

Awww... so cute! :D

Poetry is like... breathing. You do it because if you didn't, you wouldn't be able to breathe. O_o Personally, when I'm feeling some sort of emotion and the words align ...

Ah, okay. I guess it's Firefox then. :)

Snoink, you're going to have to explain this part to me: And about I have sex with random guys. Perhaps you meant "me having"? Oops, thanks. It's supposed to be ...